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Barbara Laman's avatar

Well done! The transition from benignly undecided to malevolent monster seems a bit of a stretch, but it works quite well.

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John C Martin Jr's avatar

This was a beautiful piece. The words flowed nicely. It is like reading a painting.

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Tara Dublin's avatar

Thank you!!

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